For today I want to work out the following sequence of concerns:
1) What are the fundamental sources of pain that for Yeats at
this time promise also to isolate the possible strengths or situatings
of soul that poetry can meaningfully pursue. Here I think the most important issue is the possibility
the Vision materials give of correlating the state of individual
psyches with the nation and with the large historical forces that
impinge on both. Yeats presents himself as wanting to speak for a nation while being
desperately afraid that he will be consumed by that identification
into the very forces that are destroying its spirit. 2) What does
the increasing concern for the tragic add to his version of soul-making? How do poems like meditation in time of civil
War and Leda and Dialogue of Self and soul extend and alter the
forms of self-possession that we tracked from Irish Airman to
prayer for Daughter? 3) My way of responding to this question will
be to track how Yeats now casts the life of the subject as inseparable
from how it engages the constant pressure of objectifying forces
within and without. One
cannot construct masks against history but one must test oneself
by how fully one feels its otherness to what one desires. Then the issue becomes how can one be an intense willing
and self-regarding subject without being a fool, given the objectifying
forces within history and even in ones nagging psyche? How can subjectification not be embarrassing in relation
to objectifying forces within history and society and time. Then the Winding Stair inaugurates a recasting of
subject-object relations to stress not their opposition to one
another but the possibility that the only feasible intensity for
the subject is to find ways of fully identifying subjectivation
with something like a rage to inhabit the forces that traditionally
are seen as making one an object. This is not merely engaging history but somehow of possessing
its violence. But even here two sets of forces emerge that
keep restoring the battle of self vs soul since one set of objectifying
forces drive us to the craziness of being a body within history,
the other toward being a soul driven out of the body by its own
orientation toward death.
A.1)The opening situation of The Tower has to establish
links and tensions among the personal, the metaphysical, and the
social on its many levels of manifestation. And in doing that it composes what we might call the field
where the tragic takes on focus for consciousness, because his
sense of his aged being makes every form of action seem only to
remind him that that is no country for old men. Sailing to Byzantium sets what
we might call the personal confrontation with mortality that defines
a basic role for both art and philosophyto make visible
what a plausible object for imaginative identification might be
to the heart sick with desire and fastened to a dying animal. The first two stanzas begin with painful indicatives, and
they prepare the way for the visionary imperatives of the third
stanza. So why add a fourth? *What does this stanza add? At the least it indicates that the prayer for transformation
cannot suffice for a mortal who cannot not imagine what he will
be after nature. Then
in the very effort to interpret transcendental desire I think
he finds the ultimate irony of being in history. He still wants to keep in touch and have an effect on the
living. And while he fantasizes knowing what will come,
he also reveals his continuing dependency on historical forcesin
fact and in desire.
2) Perhaps because he cannot escape history, the next poem,
The Tower, begins from the idea that the heart cannot
be consumed. One has to frame its passions by looking to
abstract argument, and hence replacing the art of sailing to Byz
with philosophy of sorts. That
at least promises an alternative to the life of the dying body. But how get from the personal to the philosophical without
having the philosophical destroy the very sense of self that one
is trying to appease? *What
do you think of how Yeats handles his pain in this poem? Parts two and three of the poem try to anchor the movement
to abstraction in series of personal gestures that have to risk
two kinds of embarrassment. They can embarrass as evidence of sheer neediness,
and they can embarrass as indications of his own limitations,
of the ways that turning to personal resources cannot successfully
secure or ground the wisdom and the power he needs. The I verbs and the reliance on his own creations
seem to me hopelessly inadequate to the assertions proferred. And even the nature of his worries about woman won or woman
lost and about his own turning away from the heroic seem to me
painfully evasive of the level of suffering with which the poem
begins. So I see this
poem as a monumental failure for his poetics of personal monuments. The soul he will need is not something he can make, and
the distance he projects for this soul at the end is not something
he can fully will because of his interests in the dimension of
time. The subjectivity
he wants cannot flee or abstract the world of objects but must
make itself within them. We are on the way to the value of tragedy.
3) But before we get to tragedy, Yeats has to work more intensely
on this sense of his own evasiveness of the very sources of his
pain. He must let the
objective conditions emerge more fully so that what challenges
soul as subject can be more fully encountered. So far he has treated the objectivity as primarily the
state of his body. But he may be suffering even more from his
relation to those aspects of his social body that deny him the
possible role of subject who wills his relation to public life. a) Why begin Meditation in Time of Civil War
with Surely. I see the very status of assertion being called
into question, as if assertion were also reassertion and hence
entirely suspectnot unlike Arnold. The poem begins by giving occasion on every level for the
sense of mockery to come. And the effort to establish the subject here
also provides evidence for its problematic imaginary activities
that it needs to shore itself up. Homer gives us a model
of lifes own self-delight extending into writing. But when Y tries figures for delight like the fountain
as a metaphor for what the rich provide, he can only trust instead
figures like the empty sea shell. What is the basic difference between these
two classes of figure? Part
of an answer emerges when his own inabilities seem to generate
the next fantasyif the rich are not organically an extension
of life maybe they can figure an antithetical relation to natural
plenitude. To have plenitude
we must begin with a vital bitterness. But if that is true, then all his fantasies
of aristocratic ease seem terribly limited because he has taken
the mask for the reality and so left out the kind of force necessary
for what he imagines. Consequently
he has not faced the historical factors that suggest once the
ease is established the constructed world might take our
greatness with our bitterness. And stylistically he will have to wonder about
chiasmic plenitude as imaginative achievement. That may not catch the bitterness and so risks leaving itself all
too vulnerable to history. Also
by engaging the issues this elementally he can perhaps avoid the
dependency on his own will that limits his position in the
Tower. **So the second poem turns away from the I of the
Tower to the this of his material situation
attempting to build within bitterness.
b) The third poem brilliantly builds on this building. It narrows the focus even furtherfrom
my house to my sword. But
in doing this it also locates for him the possibility of still
a role to play since there remains a workable fiction of passing
value on. And the violence of the sword now returns in relation to its beauty,
as if one could explain the other. The last line also does its own violence to the meter as
its version of screaming and pushing the limits of what can remain
art.
c) The fourth poem lets history back in. Can one have confidence in heritage. Probably the force of history is much more
powerful than the force of artifact and heritage. No state of the subject can compete with this level of objective
existence. He can save
his own self-image but only at the cost of withdrawal into the
world of private purposes. d) But history will not even let the self-image survive
this situation. *Poem 5 is incredible because of how simple structural contrasts
so measure the demise of the egos illusions. The first two stanzas are pure description. History and these men leave no room for Yeats at all. So when he does enter he has to face the fact
that he has no place in the sceneone of the deepest anxieties
possible I think. And
notice how he makes the rhyme so strong here to isolate caught
sonically as well as syntactically.
e) I love the idea that
the next poem has to begin by looking back at the bees, at an
order of building that has nothing to do with human hope or purpose. For the humans there is only the progression from uncertainty to
specific death to the dark side of the bitterness theme. Bitterness may lead to producing spare beauty. But it also may just brutalize by giving more substance
to our enmities than our loves (as has happened to much contemporary
criticism). So the poem
can only evoke the honey bees and use a refrain as if that could
provide the social connection and urgency that content cannot
do.
f) Finally Yeats tries the old visionary position of the top of
the tower. What can one
see from there at this specific time? He sees at first only landscape in very general terms. So what he cannot find on the outside he starts to provide
from the inside in terms of monstrous familiar images. There seems only violence (going back to Jacques Molay)
and violence has the tendency to fill his own void by sucking
him into the chants for revenge. Then he does manage to have bitterness create its opposite
in the figure of the unicorned ladies. But the images no sooner catch his attention
than they are erased by history. *It is as if Yeatsian imagining now seems out of phase
with its fatality, so there is no transformation but only violent
vacillation. Syntax then takes the stage to define what it means to give place
to the brazen hawks. Their
force is to make every other alternative appear negated so that
there is only a nothing but self and world reduced
to various metonymies. g)*I dont know what to do with the final stanza. It seems as if Yeats has to turn against history,
that is against all that he sees from the tower to return to a
world he constructs by fantasizing. But he sees that any positive won from this mess immediately
becomes a negative because of all the contrasts and dangers it
produces. So why does he link his interest in images to his ambivalence as
a growing boy. How many
uses of as enter here? I think one use emerges as a literal equationI feel
nothing but the raging impotence of youth, only now I have to
see it as hopeless impotence that makes the entire quest for soul
in self seem doomed to the status of evasion.
B.I think Nineteen Hundred and Nineteen tries to find
in energy what the previous poems could not find in thinking and
imagining, as if there were a nature that would support voice. There is no detour into the I. There is directly the we, defined by two emotions
so intense that it is impossible not to share them. There is the sense of history as loss leaving only an intolerable
present and the desire for ghostly solitude. And there is a tremendous sense that everything once allowing
lyric desire now has to turn back on the self, or on what had
been self, in an impersonal and inescapable sense of irony. The I becomes the we or the he. And piecing thoughts together offers only the sense of
being weasels fighting in a hole. Traditionally lyric seeks an I that can speak
for the universal. Here
the universal proves too easy, too much just the stance of pathos
leaving no space for individual resistance. And so all energy has to take the objective form of mockery,
a form where the subject turns on itself to treat self as irreducibly
object open to debunking knowings. Finally the shape of the line imitates the movement into
reduction. Then as the
line expands and dream returns one looks for Yeatsian transformation. But in fact the prosaic, reduced line leads not into myth-making
or soul-making but into a nightmare even worse than the historical
facts. Imagination yields only the image of the basis of aristocracythe
idealization by which women choose their breedingnow in
a situation where desire is condemned to submit to the insolent
and stupid fiend Robert Artisson.
C. The volume ends in despair, wound in mummy thoughts and
trying to identify with that abstraction. But Leda at least opens another path that Winding
Stair will pursue. This poem is a sonnet but a strange
one pulling against its
own formal imperatives but remaining recognizably within them. Leda uses conventional form in order to break poetry
away from the space of reflection into something like the immediate
event, where the poetry comes as close as possible to participating
within the rape that it accounts. But, as we have seen with all of Yeats major breakthroughs
since Responsibilities, it seems as if he can achieve such
events only by identifying with a voice that is not his personal
one. Here we find another
effort to identify with a female consciousness, but this time
in the form of a mythic figure within high culture whom he cannot
simply create as a figure within his own parable. He has to grant the strangeness of the situation, and he
does so by intensifying what is utterly strange and other about
the event that no self can control. We as critics then have to ask How this poem
actually engages the uncontrollable mystery on the bestial floor,
and how it manages to suggest that even here a certain kind of
articulate consciousness might be possible if one foregoes any
dream that one can discursively interpret ones relationship
to history?
1) What relation does the poem establish with its audience and how
might this relation differ from more conventional poetry. Why is this a deformed sonnet? Are we given an overheard thought, a public
statement, a personal expression, a dramatic situation to be seen
as if it were on a stage? None
of these alternatives seem to me quite right. I think we have to treat this poem as an attempt to have
language compose a series of actual states for its audience as
if they had to witness the force of this event. One could say that this is a dramatic poem, but with two
important differences--the drama is literal: the events within
the reading of the poem carry the metaphorical power, and the
stage for the event is one where the spirit explores its own possibilities.
2) What are the constituents of the event, and what does the event
do or, better, where does the event lead the imagination? Look at the first stanza. Literally it presents the event of the rape,
but what other basic properties does the event have? Syntax provides an interesting drama for consciousness. It has to hold in relation participles that
do not modify the main clause, all expressing violent conditions,
with the flat image that it has of the result of the event.
3) What does the poem make of the event qualities in what follows? I think it uses formal parallels to develop quite intricate
contrasts among mental states. The second quatrain offers a series of event
based questions that are primarily psychological intensifiers. Then notice the third stanzas tremendous
shift from psychology to sheer physicality that in turn becomes
the bearer of history. Conception
is set in motion, and everything that is fated follows. This immense leap from psyche to body and then from body
to history sets a situation in which the participles of stanza
1 and the questions of stanza 2 return in stanzas three and four
but in a very different way. What is different about the participles? They now do modify a noun and are not absolute
constructions. Why might
this matter? It requires
us to focus on what her consciousness can contain and grasp. Now the questions are not about her emotions but about
her knowledge. But knowledge
of what? And what kind of knowledge does the shift in
participles seem to make possible? The poem wants us to pursue these questions. Minimally the knowledge is of a rapist-god with tremendous
power. But it is also knowledge of a god who is himself
subject to some greater power, some power that allows the beak
to let her drop. This
power could just be pure sexuality--he has to finish. And it also could be the history that needs him to finish
so that she will conceive. In either case Leda's knowledge is that of
a rape victim aware of being in the direct power of awesome forces. But the poem also offers the possibility of
somehow turning victimage into a strange and thrilling transcendence
of her ordinary humanity, figured in how the participles transcend
the opening ones. She
can feel the full force of various necessities. More important, *she can go from question to exclamation
without passing through the indicative. So the poet can imagine a form almost adequate to what
this effort at knowing victimage might involve.
4) Yeatsian modernity
now proposes the link of two grand feelings. One is the feeling of that victimage as total, without
a caring god to ease the abandonment. The other is of the greed
to want to know the fullness of that abandonment and the strange
sense that in art one can rival the very god who is the victimizer
because one can envision full knowing. The shock of a poem identifying with being
raped is part of the overall sense of how we come upon ourselves
as victims of history. And
turning shock into exclamation promises a transcendental new barbarism. The one thing that can measure up to the barbarism is the full grasp
of what linguistic resources allow as grounds for knowing Leda.