Statement for Modernism and Theory
An age of criticism is not an age of writing, nor an age of reading:
it is an age of criticism. People still read, still write-and well; but for
many of them it is the act of criticism which has become the
representative or Archetypal act of the intellectual.
(Randall Jarrell, Poetry and the Age, 1953)
Forgive me for beginning on a personal note. But feeling old in this profession seems to
impose the personal on one, especially if one has to offer general remarks. The problem for me is how not to rest in
lament or nostalgia or complaint-probably pretty much the same state-when I reflect
on the current state of literary studies. Therefore my first thought about this essay was to do what I could as a
theorist to combat the various forms of "materialist" cultural studies now
dominating the field. But if I could say
something new about that topic, and this is a big "if," the odds are very good
that it would not be heard.
I need a different
path. I have to propose some model for
future work that is compatible with the prevailing ideologies but without quite
conforming to them. The not so young
will realize the magnitude of this task.
The only way I can do that is to milk the personal for
the little it is worth, then stage an effort at self-correction that I can
propose as also a path for future work. I want to recall what first excited me as possibilities for professional
study when I was leaving graduate school in the late 1960's. I will argue that the excitement younger
critics find in the various forms of cultural criticism now dominating
modernist studies is substantially like what I experienced, with one major
difference. Ambitious critical work
shaped by what seemed new in the late sixties tried to show that individual
writers produced a thinking necessary for the culture, while our new theories
minimize authorial agency, seeking to show how texts read in historical context
bring to light significant aspects of the culture in which they are
embedded. This is not a small
difference. But I think stressing it
tempts us to overlook the significant common elements linking the two models. Negatively they both insist that close
reading in itself could not suffice because criticism has to contextualize its
materials and show how whatever reading is performed addresses pressing
problems within the culture. And
positively this ambition leads to what I will call allegorical projects because
in order to make visible the texts role in the culture critics have to provide
a larger story into which the particular details fit. The particular links among details would be
quite different-especially in the degree to which they stressed or minimized
the specific achievements of authors as thinkers and as makers. Yet we should not ignore the shared model of
satisfaction in developing the larger stories and in feeling that criticism was
an act directly addressing profound cultural needs. I think this common model of satisfaction is
one important reason critics could readily switch allegiances, say from
deconstruction and other forms of postmodernist thematics
to materialist and historicist projects.
After forty years of "advanced" criticism largely shaped
by these allegorical models, it seems to me time to ask what those practices
cost and how there might be alternative ways of honoring our concerns to make
the work of criticism relevant to the manifest needs of our culture. While I cannot even touch on the variety of
critical stances these forty years have produced, I can suggest that to the
extent that they depend on allegorical frameworks to realize their cultural
ambitions they are likely to generalize too quickly from the particular art
object in order to make claims about the
possible force of that particular in relation to overall cultural values and
practices.[1] These generalizations obviously seem
compelled to minimize the multi-faceted intensities, sympathies, and
identifications the art makes possible. So for my positive argument I hope to show that there is much critical
work still to be done from a primarily aesthetic perspective emphasizing the
affective force of particular objects. That
work will also have to be framed within general terms, but the framing will not
a story the works share so much as the abstract need to address their
particularity.
The stakes in this shift seem to me quite
substantial. It should be clear that
there are significant social benefits in society's developing agents capable of
wide-ranging and deep concrete admirations, sympathies, and delights. It also matters that culture develop richer
alternatives to the epistemic ideals dominant in academic culture since the
Enlightenment. Epistemic orientations
assume that the only thinking that matters for the social good is thinking structured
by disciplines enabling them to secure knowledge claims and propose articulate
models for solving problems and for dissolving conflict. I want instead to show we can finesse epistemic
versions of inquiry so that we can concentrate on how particulars engage our
capacities to respond to and reflect upon affective dimensions of our
experience. Therefore I suggest that
criticism concentrate on how the manner by which the work engages the world
affords a different kind of matter.[2] Then the value of critical work need not depend
directly on our showing that individual works participate in some general story
or even some general struggle for how society views itself or forms its
beliefs. We can argue that our criticism
matters socially because it keeps vital and affords self-reflection on the many
ways in which we live by other than epistemic values. Critics can promise to make readers aware of
the powers and investments they are capable of as affective beings, and critics
can promise that their work will provide challenges to develop abilities to respond
more fully to what makes particular texts come alive for the imagination
focusing on that specificity. This kind
of work will not thematize social or philosophical
issues, but it can try to make citizens more aware of their own capacities for
self-enjoyment and for sympathy with a range of ways people are governed by
cares, attachments, and projections of more satisfying lives. We have seen enough of ideas and arguments
that we should be ready to try other routes to reducing violence and
reconciling differences.
I will use two documents from the late sixties to
illustrate how sophisticated criticism becomes allegorical and how the major
critics in the sixties set ambitions that still govern how critics imagine
their tasks. These two critical texts
have very different emphases and even political commitments, but they were both
instances of how European philosophy might be used to illuminate what in modernist
writing could resist the nihilism that seemed infecting every aspect of
cultural life early in the twentieth century. The major impact created by J. Hillis Miller's
Poets of Reality was the
demonstration that one could honor the complexity and imaginativeness of
literary texts without the exhaustive close reading or thematics
of paradox in which we were trained. One
could treat writers as thinkers and treat their texts as aspects of dialectical
processes realizing what powers that thinking might possess. Miller told a compelling story of how modernist
writing, especially but not exclusively modernist poetry, engaged a modernity
that posed a serious crisis of cultural nihilism, in the process developing a
"journey beyond nihilism toward a poetry of reality" (1). On re-reading I was struck by how Miller's
language could convincingly rise to the level of the immense crisis he posited,
but only by composing an elaborate allegory: "When God and the creation become
objects of consciousness, man becomes a nihilist. Nihilism is the nothingness of consciousness
when consciousness becomes the foundation of everything" (3). And the triumph of technology is the ultimate
mark of this regnant consciousness, since the culture comes to depend utterly
on what it has made rather than on what might be encountered as given by the
world. Yet, Miller shows, some modern
writers have the courage and intelligence to make the "nihilism latent in our
culture . appear as nihilism" (5). Then it becomes possible "to go beyond it by
understanding it" (5). Writers can turn
from the recesses of "subjectivism" in order to abandon "the independence of
the ego (7). By learning " to "walk
barefoot in reality" (as Wallace Stevens put it) they could accept a world that
is fundamentally a surface of co-presence rather than the traditional divide
between appearance and the promise of depth: "This space is the realm of the
twentieth century poem," a "space in which things, the mind, and words coincide
in the closest intimacy" (8).
Irving Howe is strikingly different in his tone-he does not
cast himself as an academic to other academics-and in his broader perspective
on modernist writing. But at the allegorical core of his account of
modernism Howe turns to the same challenge posed by the writers' sense of the
nihilism pervading modern social life. Howe begins the introduction to
his anthology Literary Modernism with his characteristically keen
attention to what writers feel as cultural imperatives:
Modern writers find that they begin to work at a moment when the culture
is marked by a prevalent style of perception and feeling; and their
modernity consists in a revolt against this prevalent style, an unyielding
rage against the official order. (13)
Then he lists a series of
reasons for that rage that all emphasize a sense of spiritual crisis forcing
literature to play roles once reserved for theology and philosophy. For Howe, as for Lionel Trilling, the most
important shift characterizing modernism is from the quest for truth to "writing
as the purification of a sincerity at least capable of accurately portraying an
individual's suffering and desires for change, whatever the objective
conditions might bear" (19): "There is a hunger to break past the bourgeois proprieties
and self-containment of culture toward a form of absolute personal speech, a
literature deprived of ceremony and stripped to revelation" (16). For Miller that idealizing of personal speech
would only exacerbate the subjectivism of the age. But as Howe warms to his topic he
increasingly echoes Miller's concerns. He treats Modernism as being rooted in Romanticism but having to find
alternatives to its transcendental hopes (21-22). Therefore modernity confronts an "extreme
sense of historical impasse, the assumption that something about the experience
of our ages is unique, a catastrophe without precedent" (15). The catastrophe is most pronounced in the
dynamic that generates the emphasis on personal speech: for modern culture,
"the object perceived seems always on the verge of being swallowed up by the
perceiving agent, and the act of perception in danger of being exalted to the
substance of reality" (14). Then Howe
can address what happens in modernist poetry:
For the Symbolist poet, the archetypal figure in modernism, there is no
question, however, of describing such an experience: for him the moment
of illumination occurs only through the action of the poem, only through
its thrust as a particular form. Nor is there any question of relating it to
the experience of a life time, for it is unique, transient, available only the
matter-perhaps more important, only in the moment of the poem. The
poet does not transmit as much as he engages in a revelation. (27)
One feels here Howe's
distaste for this symbolist project. Unlike Miller, he does not seem to believe in the efficacy of such
revelation, but he is bound as a literary historian to accommodate himself to
what hope the poets can hold out. It is
almost as if Howe is convinced by Trilling's famous
essay lamenting his students lack of discomfort with modernist demands on the
spirit, so that his own unhappiness with this literary model is testimony to
his authenticity in allying himself with it. (Trilling's essay is
in fact reprinted in Howe's anthology.)
For the sixties this picture enabled
a vision of the artist as hero. For our
new century the critic has to play the heroic role, since only the critic can
either make explicit the author's negativity or impose the necessary negativity
in relation to those moments when authors give way to self-projection or
utopian fantasies. Our allegorical
stage is composed by setting literary examples in social contexts then allowing
these contexts to provide the critical terms capable of resisting seduction by
imaginary states so as to show what those efforts at seduction are trying to
mask. That contemporary criticism seeks
universalizing tales is most explicit in Frederic Jameson's claims about totalization. But
critics who see themselves at the opposite pole to Jameson, most eloquently
Judith Butler, are likely to develop their own universalizing tales of how some
kind of otherness is necessary to save modernism from the fantasies of mastery
inherent in its enabling philosophical allegories. And criticism becomes the discipline capable
of producing the kind of historical consciousness that provides a vital sense
of how that otherness has increasingly been evaded by the normalizing force of
capital.
If I going to make claims about the dangers of allegory,
I obviously have to worry the status of my own argument. Why is a claim about the importance of
aesthetic particulars to society, especially to society still in the throes of
nihilism not just another allegory? Simply
put, there is an obvious difference between generalizations that support a
particular argumentative claim and generalizations that labor to get
particulars a hearing as particulars. This can be illustrated by just touching on deliciously complex
materials. I think there is a huge
difference between generalizations about the importance of particular others,
and generalizations that make "the other" an ontological category. Similarly there is a huge difference between Heidgerean and Sartrean
phenomenology that seeks to change our thinking about the nature of being and
phenomenology in the spirit of Husserl that seeks to
change our models for describing particulars. (The issues get immensely complicated here because both modes of
phenomenology cast themselves as alternatives to the epistemic orientation that
I also complain about. But in so far as
ontological phenomenology makes overt claims about being, those claims seem to
me to enter in a world of propositions and proofs, albeit unwillingly.)
The same ambivalence occurs in modernist social
criticism, where there is substantial tension between the particulars of
historical analysis and the efforts to give those particulars general
significance in relation to aspects of modern social life. Here I will concentrate on those aspects of
these practices that to the allegorical, as well as the allegorizings
of the practices as exploring possibilities of social significance. But there are too many and too diverse
critical practices tending to the allegorical for me now to take any one or two
as representative. I trust this is not a
problem for my essay because I can assume my readers can call to mind
appropriate test cases. The more
important issue is whether they will entertain my proposal to look beyond those
particular examples to the possibility that there are common models of what
make satisfying work even among those who disagree sharply about preferred
methodologies.
Notice how Miller makes important use of the language of
exposure (Miller's "making nihilism appear") soon to become very popular for
adamantly anti-philosophical uses. And
notice also how the Heideggerean mode of cultural
criticism stressing reliance on technology offers close parallels with
influential Frankfurt school analyses of commodity fetishism and
instrumental reason. In fact even where
there is sharp disagreement between the generations about where criticism best
locates socially effective agency for texts, it is arguable that this
difference is a difference about means and not about ends.
Perhaps the most striking aspect of
rereading Miller's and Howe's texts is how intently their philosophical
allegorizing takes on an edifying, even preacherly.
urgency to save society from its self-inflicted wounds. Miller's story gives the writers power as
thinkers to provide at least the glimpse of an alternative world where the
tendency to seek subjective mastery is overcome by the capacity to have
consciousness dwell in co-presence with things. So it does not seem to me a large leap to argue that cultural criticism
shares with Miller and with Howe the sense that the culture is in a parlous
state and the role of the critic is to articulate ways of addressing its
blindness, self-satisfaction, and insensitivity to what makes desirable change
possible. There is in common the
language of exposing conditions of crises, the sense that literature should
take responsibility for a culture's suffering by directly addressing its causes
(although the sixties did not see that perhaps the literature might be part of
the cause of the suffering), and above all the presence of an allegorical
thinking that divides fields of inquiry into what matters for addressing a
cultural plight and all the rest that is mere literature. All of the modernist
writing that mattered seemed to have to engage the increasing objectification
in which empiricist thinking or capitalist thinking divided subject from object
and hence created an imposing threat of nihilism. And this meant stressing those powers of art
that could be seen as directly or indirectly offering direct engagements with
that cultural condition. The relevant
powers became the ability to wield versions of negativity like irony or
withdrawal into abstraction, and the ability to create sufficiently complex and
internally dense structures to be taken seriously as modes of non-discursive
thinking allied with the kinds of philosophy that were opposing the empiricist
causes of nihilism.
Here I cannot develop these assertions
but have to presume them in order to sketch my positive alternative to
allegories philosophical and social. I
want to sketch a contrasting view of how modernist writing might reward a
renewed aesthetic attention to particular experiences that texts make
possible. It seems impossible to deny
that Miller and Howe are completely right about at least two things. Modernism staged itself as responding to
world-historical crisis, so that criticism would be thin if it did not try to
take seriously the terms of that crisis, at least provisionally. And that crisis demanded of writers that they
reject, in form and in content, the basic roles society had scripted for
them. Significant writing could not be
content to delight and to instruct. It
had to seek the power to convince audiences that they were in the midst of a
spiritual crisis, and it had to find ways to reject descriptive tasks so that
it could perform the work of realization, work that would enact how minds might
experience the powers of language to articulate fresh ways of engaging the
world.
However, those justified ambitions created a serious
problem for criticism. How could critics
respond to that general sense of crisis and still devote their energies to
developing the particular stakes various writers wagered? How could they dramatize the seriousness of
the writer without emphasizing how they participated in this necessary project
of confronting nihilism and its correlates like commodification?
On the other hand, how could they capture the distinctiveness of individual
texts if they required for each instance the same story of how each writer
developed his or her methodological version of stepping "barefoot into
reality." The most ambitious critics
would have to engage what for shorthand I will call "ontological projects,"
(later to become social projects posed by the critic) and emphasize the
meta-dimensions that allied texts with one another. There could be little attention to the many
intriguing texts in which writers elaborated other projects or simply set their
imaginations to work at finding release from such crushing seriousness. Let me for now just ask how many
philosophical or cultural critics descending from Miller or from Howe attend to
the anti-allegorical Dada poems in Spring
and All or the intricacies of Eliot's
"La Figlia Che Piange," or Pound's visionary Cantos (or for that matter to
Pound's vicious Cantos), or the range from delight to attunement to fatality
that Stevens wrests from his fascination with the imagination? There is much more critical energy devoted to
the ideal of the poem creating a reality on its own than there is responsiveness
to how poems actually compose realities. And criticism still founders when it is faced with specifying how these
texts establish terms for a version of close readerly
attention to texts that could insist on its differences from philosophical
reflection. To articulate an alternative
to her justified suspicions about her peers' philosophical ambitions Marjorie Perloff could only come up with the self-defeating notion
of "indeterminacy."
If my criticisms are valid in relation to the treatment
of those poets who are among the usual suspects dragged out when the topic
turns to the struggle against nihilism, imagine how the problems get
exacerbated in relation to other terrific poets like Crane, Frost, Moore, H.D., Hughes, Cullen, and especially Stein (who
could not abide talk of nihilism). The
concern for philosophical generalization that shaped the modernist canon for
criticism in the sixties occludes a lively and significant range of feelings,
emotions, and reflections that these writers compose in their work. Not only is the exclusion of these particular
states a major impoverishment of "reality" (think of what might adorn the feet
(pun intended) of Hart Crane or Frank O'Hara stepping into reality), but that
exclusion constitutes a major failing in the struggle against nihilism. For nihilism may be far less vulnerable to
abstractions (which seem the same old efforts of consciousness to work out of
the fly bottle that it also constitutes) than it is to the proliferation of the
complex embodied pleasures in existence that articulate art provides. Critiques of nihilism that never mention
sympathy and delight or privilege lyric ecstasies like Pound's early Cantos
seem peculiarly obtuse to the practical aspects of cultural crisis. (In fact the earnestness of some of these
critical endeavors might even seem to provide good reason to take up nihilistic
attitudes toward cultural life.)
To change this situation we have to begin with the
assumption that while major writers certainly are thinkers, they have to deploy
that thinking for processes of embodiment that explore the resources of a given
medium. And such explorations have to be
governed in large part by the pursuit of particular satisfactions and pleasures
that can be only tangentially related to any philosophical conception of
truth. The primary crisis for a maker is
how do I make this particular investment of my time pay off by charging this
particular object with what will compel an audience's attention. Writers do not lose their sense of
overarching cultural crisis, but they have to be aware that addressing only
such a general concern will not produce sufficient care for differentiating
objects from one another. And it will
not make for much range in subjective investments. Perhaps the best response to nihilism is not
always pursuing a program for making the "nihilism latent in our culture .
appear as nihilism" or even for composing a "space in which things, the mind,
and words coincide in the closest intimacy" 8). Perhaps one important response is to take manifest pleasure in the kinds
of thinking that make objects and rhythms awaken the senses, diction startle
the mind, and situations seem handled with wisdom and sympathy. So from my perspective a primary task now for
modernist criticism is to call attention to the
variety of affective situations enabled by modernist culture.
Some of these will demand
intense cultural criticism, but others will show the way to take delight in
various aspects of what modernity makes possible. These shifts are already taking place within
American culture, at least if the immense success of museum exhibitions of Dada
and surreal works is a valid indicator of priorities within the culture which
worries about such things. It is high
time to work out how theory might go about facilitating the appreciation of
that variety.
I am not proposing a formalism or a complete return to
close-readings uninformed by philosophy. I am proposing a somewhat different way to imagine how poets make
articulate modes of thinking that are important for their culture's struggles
against nihilism and against the commodity fetishism which is nihilism in
practice because it admits no other to the immediate possessive desires of the
individual. Philosophy confronts nihilism
by argument or by Wittgensteinian and Heidegerrean modes of thinking that appear inseparable from
processes of treating aspects of the world as if they were laden with
value. But the arts best realize values
when they appeal to our judgments of manner, of how the work makes specific
gestures that command interest and project exemplary qualities. Art is thinking, but thinking as a way of
making something happen in how an object guides our ways of engaging the
world.
These
assertions rehearse general arguments emphasizing manner over matter that I
made much more extensively in my Particulars
of Rapture. Now I want to test their
value as an alternative way of honoring the philosophical engagements of
modernist writing. I hope to show how
important it is to distinguish between the phenomenological ontology of
Heidegger and his heirs and a looser, more practical phenomenology that teases
out what the stakes are for consciousness as it fosters intricate relationships
with intentional objects. In my view Heideggerean thinking is doomed to some version of
subordinating particulars to talk about "being" and then talking about being in
terms of generalized entities like consciousness" or "language" or "spirit" or,
increasingly, just "otherness." Cultural
criticism came to power in justified resistance to that level of abstraction
and that distance from quotidian practices. And this criticism has proven itself quite strong in talking about
existing social relations and even in analyzing the material effects produced
by art objects as they enter into relation with readers and with cultural
institutions. But this criticism simply
does not have the resources to handle one of those quotidian practices-the
activity of making art objects that focus on what can be exemplary in concrete
manners of action offered for an audience's reflection. The relevant manner will usually display an
expertise within a medium capable of establishing engagement with a singular
situation-no mean task. But that
expertise will also try to make what the medium mediates also focus on how represented
agents can act so as to elicit specific, often complex affective states that invite
audiences to test how they might participate in the state displayed.
Most
cultural criticism is committed to social realism, at least on the level of
what it takes as effective reality. It
cannot therefore deal with the arts as intentional structures defining
possibilities or potentials. It must
collapse that potential into highly generalized interpretations of the
significance of a work or go to the
opposite extreme by focusing on effects on actual readers, or perhaps on the
careers of actual authors. At both poles
criticism misses not only the distinctive kind of reality art brings to the
world as possibility, but also the nature of the site where art can claim to
have a distinctive philosophical role. For art's thinking is not bound to the aboutness
of empirical or even generalizing thought. Art's thinking begins in hypotheticals-what
would thinking and feeling be like if the artist made these assumptions or
acted in this manner. Then it quickly
leaps to offering a hypothetical about this hypothetical, or an "as if" about
an "as if." Having constructed the
hypothetical and pushed it toward realization in several dimensions, the art
invites the audience's efforts to grapple with provisional processes of
identification or the refusal or the modification of identification. In other words art does not offer argumentative
paths for thinking so much as it offers affective engagements with a concrete
embodiment of what for the artist seem particular states worth investing in. These states are offered as invitations to audiences
to use them as exemplars for directing their attention, producing care for what
they encounter, or determining what is worthy of their own capacities for make
emotional investments.
For my test cases I want to turn to two quite well-known
modernist poems-in one case a poem typically read in allegorical terms about
nihilism in modern culture and in the other a poem rarely attended to by
critics because it does not participate in that allegory, yet is one of the
most complex expressions of feeling among modernist lyrics. My first example is the last two-thirds of
this first stanza in Eliot's Waste Land:
April is the cruellest month, breeding
Lilacs out of the dead land, mixing
Memory and desire, stirring
Dull roots with spring rain.
Winter kept us warm, covering
Earth in forgetful snow, feeding
A little life with dried tubers.
Summer surprised us, coming over the Starnbergersee
With a shower of rain; we stopped in the colonnade,
And went on in sunlight, into the Hofgarten,
And drank coffee, and talked for an hour.
Bin gar keine Russin, stamm' aus Litauen, echt Deutsch.
And when we were children, staying at the arch-duke's
My cousin's, he took me out on a sled,
I was frightened. He said, Marie,
Marie, hold on tight. And down we went.
In the mountains, there you feel free.
I read much of the night and go south in the winter. (53)
This is certainly not a
passage about delight or ecstasy, and even its sympathy is painfully
analytic. Yet I attend to it because the
best way to indicate the powers of an affective reading is to establish what
that reading brings out that allegorical and philosophical readings tend to
miss. There are few passages in modern
poetry more fundamental to abstract literary accounts of modernist
nihilism. But there are also few
passages where attending to the allegorical matter so drastically impoverishes
the affective intensities produced by how the experience is rendered.
Typical allegorizing accounts of Eliot's poem tend to
emphasize the opening two sentences from this first stanza. Those sentences enact the basic reversal of
Chaucerian hopes for spring renewal; there the allegorical corpse takes up its
residence; there abstract memory fuses uncomfortably with desire; there the
poem states the wish to rest in a forgetfulness that at least masks the pain of
having to exist; and there the repeated participles first establish the power
of language to provide some capacity for vitality and focused need not
available to the actors in the poem. But
these critical accounts rarely ask why Eliot might feel the need for the
supplementary sentences that make up the rest of the paragraph. They add nothing to the allegorical
situation, so they seem mere gestures toward honoring the role of the concrete
image. Yet if read for how the manner of
this sequence affords a distinctive matter, we will find ourselves tracking an
extraordinarily evocative range of shifts in feeling that ultimately justify
and ground how the poem will proceed.
Notice first the sound and sweep of
the long expanding alliterative eighth line that provides a turn against winter. It is as if the "us" speaking in the previous
sentence is coming to life and preparing for the assertions of first person
agency in the following lines. The poem
is moving from an oppressive generalized view of the cultural situation to
human possibilities that specific human voices seem to afford. One might even say that the four lines
comprising the third sentence are a muted bourgeois version of the scene with
the hyacinth girl. There is the same strong
sense of innocence combined with remembered delight in particular situations,
although here there is no ecstasy and no drastic drop off to despair. It seems that these bourgeois voices have not
yet felt April as the cruelest month and can be at home in the quotidian. Yet what power they have is incomplete and
fleeting, largely because if the audience identifies with this initial speaker,
it will be difficult to protect themselves against the need or the aggression
of other voices. For example the
assertive voice of the Lithuanian not only expresses exile but also creates for
the audience a sharp sense of difference from the other more comfortable
voice. Then that distancing effect
extends even to the woman Marie's voice, partially because of its upper class
qualities and partially because this voice does not seem quite to mean what it
says. Now a manifest dis-ease
comes through the voice. We hear a
neediness and even an incipient hysteria that her memories and descriptions
cannot keep concealed. So when Marie
interacts with a male companion, the scene gets strangely doubled. "Hold on tight" has a much more general scope
than the speaker recognizes. And Marie's
version of freedom is clearly something like a mask projected to cover over the
mention of fear that becomes more pervasive the more she tries to present
something like a normal life, at least normal for her class.
These are observations about the dramatic forces at
play. Eliot wants us also to feel some
of the more general aspects of his rendering of the situation. It seems as if the poem tried to turn to
particular subjects in order to mollify the severity of the impersonal and
generalizing allegorical voice speaking the first two sentences. But these personal voices cannot even face
the spiritual anxiety that provokes the impersonal voice. (Marie could be the speaker of the closing
lines or perhaps not-the important point is that what she articulates has a
gravitational force on other possible voices.) As Marie's voice (or what it becomes a surrogate for) become
increasingly distant and theatrical, Eliot confronts his readers with a gulf
between the desire for self-possession and a state of incipient panic that
cries out for the kind of impersonal analysis that opens the poem. And as Marie turns to the comfort of a male
savior figure, it is difficult not to think of that analysis taking Lacanian form. Marie
exhibits an increasingly desperate demand that such an authority figure will
turn her uneasy fluid feelings into what will justify strong, explicit
affirmative emotions.
At the same time the expansive lines about
summer give way to increasingly jagged syntax and monosyllabic diction that
becomes an emblem of all of the individual speakers inability to find words
they can fully inhabit. The personal and
the impersonal begin to live one another's lives and die one another's
deaths. The effort at knowledge leads to
an effort at sympathy which in turn makes careful readers understand better the
need for that first allegorizing voice. Yet their states of awareness deepen a sense of secular subjectivity
that will never conform to what impersonality has to offer. By the end of the first stanza we learn to
feel the need for what the poem pursues, even as we come to understand better
why that pursuit will generate little more than an intensified madness. We feel why subject's need something larger
than themselves, and we confront the immense burden of defensive and hysterical
projections that make it impossible for them to recognize that they might
already be in the company of a third always with them who can provide what they
need. We feel what it will take the
entire poem to understand.
My second lyric passage is William Carlos Williams' "Dedication
for a Plot of Ground," an elegy for his grandmother. I have chosen a second poem about burial
because this one sets so different a spiritual agenda. Its commitment to intense particularity
adamantly refuses an allegorical dimension and therefore does not easily accord
with the generalizing philosophical bent that critics want as exemplars of
modernism:
This plot of ground
facing the waters of this inlet
is dedicated to the living presence of
Emily Dickinson Wellcome
who was born in England; married;
lost her husband and with
her five year old son
sailed for New York in a two-master;
was driven to the Azores;
ran adrift on a Fire Island shoal,
met her second husband
in a Brooklyn boarding house,
went with him to Puerto Rico
bore three more children, lost
her second husband, lived hard
for eight years in Santo Domingo, followed
her oldest son to New York,
lost her daughter, lost her "baby,"
seized the two boys of
the oldest son by the second marriage
mothered them-they being
motherless-fought for them
against the other grandmother
and the aunts, brought them here
summer after summer, defended
herself here against thieves,
storm, sun, fire,
against flies, against girls
that came smelling about, against
drought, against weeds, storm-tides,
neighbors, weasels that stole her chickens,
against the weakness of her own hands,
against the growing strength of
the boys, against wind, against
the stones, against trespassers,
against rents, against her own mind.
She grubbed this earth with her own hands,
domineered over this grass plot,
blackguarded her oldest son
into buying it, lived her fifteen years,
attained a final loneliness and-
If you can bring nothing to this place
But our carcass, keep out. (105-06)
Here the poetry resides
mostly in how the insistent particular predications compose a powerful amalgam
of feelings much too subtle for any public discourse. The poem comes as close as the imagination
can to combining delight with grief, while beggaring even those labels for what
is concretely happening in the language.
Williams makes the artist's agency central from the start
by emphatically defining a particular place then quickly shifting to evoke her power
to overwhelm this sense of place. Place
gives way to the predicating of details that increasingly call out for just the
kind of attention the poem gives: we
come to see that she is the kind of person who can only be known by the
impression made upon one who has felt the cumulative effect of the details that
he now conveys to others. This is a life
that takes on substance through blunt, abrupt narrative colloquially heaping up
the details and refusing any lyric adornment. There are so many significant details
to Emily's life that offering to interpret or garnish them would be silly
excess, and perhaps a sign of unwillingness to look the facts in the face. So Williams chooses to establish her strength
of character in terms of how this variety of direct predicative statements that
her memory elicits is contained by one stunning supple sentence, as if only the
abstract form of the sentence could synthesize this identity. The feeling elicited by this extended
sentence seems capable of preventing the poem from slowing down and having to
provide an interpretive hierarchy of details. The single sentence refuses even to present contrasts that would weaken
or substitute for the sense of constant expanding modification-a sense,
needless to say-which might lead to a very useful appreciation of why society
needs and fears strong characters.
I speak as if the energy of the predication suffices to
establish a substance for the elegy. But
the poem also emphasizes important differences in tone and perspective as Emily
gets older and more accustomed to the life of combat that these details
require. Once she loses her daughter and
seizes the two boys from her oldest son, the poem gravitates toward her own
perspective. With the mention of
fighting for the sons against the other grandmother and of defending herself
against thieves, then especially of resisting the girls who "came smelling
about," the poem seems no longer content to record the facts. Its verbs take on qualities that at the least
embody her sense of the struggles that dominate her life. As we open ourselves to her perspective, the
poem also develops a more abstract aspect of identification. Repetitions of "against" become almost
anaphoric-I think because that term captures the elemental force of Emily's
life. The poet finds a linguistic emblem
allowing his expansiveness to merge with the basic source of the subject's
intensities.
Williams's inventiveness is not yet exhausted. At the end of the stanza he quickly assumes a
position where identification with Emily requires leaving Emily's subjectivity
in order to complete his picture of it. She could not quite know that she even struggles against her own mind,
but the poet sees that this is the price of having to identify oneself in the
role of constant resistance. Then the second
stanza brilliantly shifts from the anaphoric profusion of "Against" to a series
of main verbs, one to a line. This
returns us to what we can take as Emily's basic drives, but now at a later
stage in her life. Her refusal to
submit to defeat led her to "blackguard" her oldest son from her second
marriage into buying her a plot of land. The sequencing of verbs captures Emily's satisfaction in inhabiting her
land after so long having only negation as what she could be sure was
hers. These verbs enact her most
intimate pleasure, and they allow the poet to share her sense of recognition that
she has made a home enabling these verbs. More important yet, this level of intimacy makes her "final loneliness"
an ultimate achievement, as if this state was the culminating wisdom born of
her sense of struggle. Attaining this
level of consciousness prepares her for death and makes it something other than
a disaster.
The only one who risks disaster at the end of this elegy
is "you," the sudden presence of what we see now is the audience for this
elegy. And what a great "you" it
is. First we might note that the speaker
has so taken on the spirit of Emily that he assumes the worst and sets himself
against even the possibility that there will be anyone involved in her story
against whom there need not be a struggle. No wonder he stresses the auditor's carcass, the parallel to the dead
body that he has been trying to revivify. His awareness of an audience, especially this audience, also makes the
poet stress his role as a teacher. Williams probably does not want an allegory about pouring one's heart
out to teach canonical texts to carcasses, but that identification is hard for
me to resist. After all his task is to
show the gulf between the body that now occupies the grave and what the
imagination can make of the life the corpse still possesses for him if he can
preserve a sense of its particularity. This, one might say, is how one combats nihilism. But to the credit of this poem, unlike Spring and All, this allegory is at best
faintly in the background.
What would it take to have the "you" bring more than his
carcass? Minimally it would take respect
for the life Emily lived. But respect is
a bit too public an emotion and not bound sufficiently to the details. Ideally, respect would be tempered in one
direction by amusement at how her voice comes through the poet's sense of her
struggles and, in the other direction, by a healthy dose of fear that one might
have to handle an Emily in one's own life. The poem also holds out the possibility of a more general and more
profound identification-not so much with the life she lived as with what she
may have learned from that life about preparing for death. "You" might bring an understanding of what is
involved in attaining that final loneliness, where one can fully embrace being
a carcass and project the sense of relatedness that makes possible.
If this "you" is allegorically inclined, and at the same
time suspicious of allegorical claims about nature or about responses to
nihilism, he or she might extend this final challenge in the poem so that it
applies to the demands a modern poetry can make. "You" might reflect on how this poem manages
without allegory to produce an appreciation of how this woman could forge a
substantial character out of her suffering, how the poet's effort at unadorned
naming gives imaginative access to that character, and how the audience might
turn away from the defensive orientation that wants to avoid facing both Emily's
intense possession of her place in life and her "final loneliness."
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